MADALITSO – Finale Episode 14
MADALITSO – Finale episode 14
A story by Jochrine Kunda
Veronica: calm down Linda, maybe you’re just imagining things no human in their right sense could ever do that
Linda: I’m not imagining things, it’s a head and it’s Michael’s and there’s a note saying he needs his daughter back. I’m sure it’s Robert
Veronica: what are you going to do concerning Madalitso?
Linda: I’m still going to ki*ll her, I can’t go down alone
Veronica: I’ve told the doctor to meet her at my boutique so we can go to the place
Linda: great move
Veronica: what of Taonga?
Linda: I’m sure she’s safe wherever she is
Veronica: meet me at Mrs Musonda’s then we can go to mom’s village with Madalitso
Linda: I’m on my way
She started packing her belongings while shaking and crying, the odour from the parcel she’d received was so strong that she couldn’t handle it any longer so she puked then wrapped the parcel and ordered one of her guards to dispose of it with a strict warning not to open it then she grabbed her bag and went to her car. She kept trying to calm down as she would cause an accident with the state she was in.
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Lindiwe: I spotted the place Agent33 spoke of and I’ll be visiting the woman
Robert: I still think you need to go with someone
Lindiwe: No, I’ll be fine
Robert: alright then Agent69, you can wipe her accounts clean now
Agent69: yes boss
He did as was instructed then Robert called Linda and put the phone on loudspeaker then Linda picked up and sounded like she was running out of breath
Robert: sis in law
Linda: Ro…Robert
Robert: so you haven’t forgotten of my existence but still go ahead and mess with my flesh and blood
Linda: I…..I…
Robert: so are you ready to surrender my daughter back to me and meet your ancestors?
Linda: not that easy, you don’t know what will hit you loser
Robert: ohhh!!! so you’re still kicking? Pray to your God that Lindiwe gets to you first otherwise I’ll crush you like the cockroach that you are
Linda: you’ll come begging to me on your knees to spare your useless lives
Robert: we’ll see about that (he hang up)
Lindiwe: I’m taking my leave
Robert: good luck sweetheart
They hugged and she took her black BMW car keys and drove away
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Linda finally got to Mrs Musonda’s shrine and threw herself in Veronica’s arms crying then they took off their shoes and entered, they exchanged greetings with Mrs Musonda
Mrs Musonda: Linda, your biggest rival is here and….
Linda: tell me something I don’t know
Mrs Musonda: I wasn’t done
Linda: I’m listening
Mrs Musonda: NEVER STEP FOOT HERE AGAIN, DEAL WITH YOUR OWN PROBLEM AND DON’T INVOLVE ME
Linda: you must be kidding me because not so long ago I was threatening Robert knowing very well that you’d give me something to……..
Mrs Musonda: I warned you beforehand, didn’t I? I told you to carefully think about killing your own mother and making your stupid decision of building that chicken run you own but you thought the world revolved around your useless self now look at you looking much older than your late mother. You’re going down and I’m not going down with you so pay me my balance and never return here
Veronica: Mrs Musonda, this isn’t the kind of person I know you to be
Mrs Musonda: you’ll pay her debt since you’re her friend because I can tell that she doesn’t have a dime in her name
Linda: please Mrs Musonda remember I’m your daughter
Mrs Musonda: No, you killed your mother when you thought you were Michelle Obama now…..
Her eyes were focused on the door with her mouth wide open then Linda and Veronica followed the direction of her eyes only to land on Lindiwe who was dressed in all black leaning against the door and patting her left foot with folded arms. Linda couldn’t believe it and she looked like the older one then Lindiwe approached them and took out a bottle then poured it all on Veronica’s abdominal area, the acid instantly tore her clothes off and ate up her skin as she gasped for air then she took out another bottle and poured it on the exposed intestines and chest area making it the end for Veronica. Lindiwe grabbed Linda and took out a knife from her pocket and started making marks on her face while she had her pinned against the wall. Mrs Musonda saw that as her opportunity to run away but Lindiwe let go off Linda and charged towards Mrs Musonda giving Linda chance to escape, she pounced on Mrs Musonda who fell on the floor and strangled her neck
Lindiwe: tell me everything that she did and is planning on doing
Mrs Musonda sang like a canary and Lindiwe was shocked by some of the things her sister did
Lindiwe: she did all that with your help, right? (tightening the grip)
Mrs Musonda: y…ye..yes
Lindiwe: you’re going to die the same way my mother did, you useless witch
She kept tightening the grip until Mrs Musonda took her last breath with her eyes popped out and tongue hanging outside then she spat on her and left
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Linda got to Veronica’s boutique and found the doctor mocking Madalitso that she was going to die
Linda: let’s go doc, we’ve got no time
She tied Madalitso’s hands and led her to the car then she drove in high speed
Linda: I hope the doctor here has told you what you’re in for
Madalitso: I’m not afraid for that, that destroys the body but cannot destroy the spirit
Linda: ifyabupuba efyo alandafye (she only speaks nonsense)
Madalitso: killing me has always been your wish but if you don’t repent even hell will reject you
Linda: I think we’re going to have problems here doc, is your tool box nearby?
Doctor: yes it is
Linda: please find something to shut her up
The doctor rolled a tape on her mouth and couldn’t fight him as her hands were tied then Linda received a call from one of her guards and she answered in irritation
Linda: what do you want?
Guard: madam, the police are here closing down the place and……..
Linda: NO, I’VE HAD ENOUGH FOR A DAY WHATS WHAT’S ALL THIS NONSENCE? (she hang up) I think I’ll just sell Robert off to the mafia
Doctor: you know Mr Robert?
Linda: No
She decided to lie because she didn’t want the impossible to happen
Doctor: I would never dream of crossing paths with that man believe me coz…….
Linda: its not the Robert you know so let’s change the topic
Doctor: where are we going to? we’ve passed two towns already
Linda: we’re leaving the province
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MADALITSO
I always wondered how people who were told they were going to die felt and I had to experience that, I thought of how I was born, when my parents died, how I grew up with grandma, the dearest memories we shared, the great relationship Peter, Saint,Hector and I had, how I spent sleepless nights fighting with books only to end up in a brothel and die at the age of 20
Me: I’m sorry grandma I can’t keep on fighting fate, I think its high time I joined you and my parents. I can’t carry on like this
I opened my eyes and saw grandma sitted next to me crying and shaking her head
Grandma: yes its time you meet them (she disappeared)
Me: so I guess its the end
I closed my eyes and decided to talk to my creator
Me: God I know that you’ve done nothing but shown love to me from the time I was born and I’ll forever be grateful for that so please accept me in whatever form I’ll reach you in, vengeance belongs only to you my God and I’ll leave you to judge my enemies. In Romans 8:38,39 is written that “For I am sure that neither death nor life, nor angels nor rulers, nor things present nor things to come,nor powers, nor height nor depth, nor anything else in creation will be able to separate us from God’s love” Forgive all my sins and receive me with a pure heart and since nothing can separate me from your love, if it’s your will that this happens so let it be AMEN!!!
I felt like I was dreaming because I opened my eyes and the car came to a stop, I had a blurred vision because my eyes were teary so I wiped off my tears and saw a black car parked in front of us blocking our way then Linda cursed and a man I recognized as Mr Patson Kumwenda, the health worker who came to educate us on Cancer stepped out of the car in an expensive suit then Linda took out a matchete knife from the doctor’s tool box and came to my side of the seat grabbing my hair tight and dragging me out, she took me to the front of her car then the doctor joined us and I saw a beautiful woman get out of the other car
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Robert: remove that thing from her mouth and let her come to me
Linda: you think I’m stupid?
She pulled the knife closer to Madalitso’s throat
Robert: I swear to cut you into pieces and feed you to the hungry dogs if I reach there without you letting her go
Linda laughed out loud then Lindiwe got in the car and returned with a gun pointed to Taonga’s head
Lindiwe: then I guess it will be an eye for an eye……..
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Linda: keep my daughter out of this
Lindiwe: really
Linda: don’t you dare touch my daughter
Lindiwe: you’re so pathetic (she pulled the trigger)
Robert communicated something with Madalitso using his eyes then Madalitso using everything she could clawed Linda’s left eye with her her hands tied making Linda quickly drop the knife and ran towards Robert then Linda tried running after her and Lindiwe shot her right leg and the doctor had wet his pants because of fear then she let Taonga go
Taonga: you shot my mother you bi….
She didn’t finish her sentence because Lindiwe slapped her hard and she saw darkness before landing on the ground, the agents took the doctor, Taonga and Linda away. Madalitso was crying in Robert’s arms and Lindiwe joined the hug
Madalitso: thank you very much Mr Patson
Robert: let’s take you home
They drove to their hotel and led Madalitso to her bedroom, she had just finished dressing up when Lindiwe walked in with a full meal
Lindiwe: you’re looking pretty my baby
Madalitso: thanks for the clothes, they look expensive
Lindiwe: (smiling) come and eat your food
Madalitso sat and started eating
Madalitso: are you Mr Patson’s wife?
Lindiwe: Mr Patson!!!
Madalitso: yes, the man you were with earlier he once came to our school and…..
Lindiwe: (laughing) yes I am
Madalitso: I’m sorry if this will offend you but you act like my grandma and you’re a younger version of her
Lindiwe: I understand, tell me about yourself
Madalitso felt like she could open up to Lindiwe and told her everything she’d been through and they were both in tears when she was done
Lindiwe: she made you go through all that? (Madalitso nodded) don’t worry I’ll always be there for you from now on
Madalitso: who are you?
Lindiwe: I’ll be right back, feel at home. (she left)
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Robert was at his warehouse and had Linda tied to a chair as he watched his agent extract the internal organs of the doctor with Linda throwing up and crying which made her look a mess
Robert: take them to hospitals so we can save a useful person’s life rather than this useless thing
Agent67: yes boss
Robert ordered the other agents to take the dead doctor’s body to the room where they had stored Michael, Mrs Musonda and Veronica’s bodies then he turned to face Linda and she was shaking with fear
Linda: I’m sorry Robert, let’s put the past behind us and move on I promise to stay in my lane
Robert laughed out loud
Robert: it won’t be fair for the accomplices to decay while the culprit lives to tell the tale
Linda: please I’ve got a daughter to take care of
Robert: don’t worry, my babe has already already taken care of it
Linda: did she ki*ll her?
Robert: she’s taken her to a mental hospital because she doubted her mental fitness when she tried to call her a b***h
Linda: how could she do that to my daughter?
Robert: if you ask me I think she even deserved worse
Linda: you two are the true definition of wickedness
Robert: we’re just trying to help you by making sure she’s taken care of because you won’t be there to do so
He was focusing his attention on something else all along then the door swung open and Lindiwe walked in with a pestle
Lindiwe: Robert, Robert where’s she?
She didn’t wait for him to respond as she charged towards Linda and kicked her chair and fell together with it and she hit her body with the pestle especially the legs and Robert watched from a distance and was scared because be never approached her when she was like that. Linda couldn’t feel her legs and her upper body felt numb leaving her with bleeding wounds, as if it wasn’t enough she started punching her face and Linda obtained a broken nose, Linda could feel her sister’s rage as she kept yelling saying all the things Madalitso went through then Robert pulled her away when she was a bit calm
Lindiwe: let me go (yelling)
Robert: you need to calm down
She pulled out a gun and shot Linda’s shoulder
Lindiwe: that’s for killing my mother
Robert: you’re calm now?
Lindiwe: yes
Robert: where did you get that thing from?
Lindiwe: I bought it of course, do I own a pestle? you’ll find me in the car and be quick
Robert sedated Linda and wouldn’t make it for the rerest of the day then locked her up together with the other bodies and set the warehouse on fire then left. Linda was making sounds like a dying animal then her mother appeared
Grandma: I told you that your downfall would be like that of a deserted dog now look at you, I’m sure even a deserted dog is much better than you and I’m sure you even envy the way I died. Welcome to the land of the dead!!! (she disappeared)
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Lindiwe and Robert showered then went to Madalitso’s room and found her crying then they both hugged her
Lindiwe: it’s all over now my baby
Madalitso: why do you keep calling me that?
Robert: what?
Madalitso: your wife keeps calling me her baby, Mr Patson
Robert: I’m Robert and she’s Lindiwe
Lindiwe: we……we…we’re your parents
Madalitso: my parents died when I was a baby so if you want to adopt me you should do it legally
They explained everything that happened and what made them leave her behind
Madalitso: so you thought the money you sent me was what I needed? I needed your love, care and support all these years. I’ve wasted 3 years of my life working in a brothel thanks to the useless decision you made and you come here claiming you’re my parents. I can survive on my own and don’t need you both I’m leaving leaving this place
Lindiwe was on her knees begging her then Madalitso saw her grandma frowning and asked Lindiwe and Robert to leave then she cried herself to sleep. She dreamt of her grandmother telling her to forgive them but she wasn’t hearing any of it
Grandma: my child to error is human but to forgive is divine
Madalitso: no I can’t mom
Grandma: you have to, that marks the end of the battle
Madalitso: after everything I went through they choose to show up now
Grandma: my child, God gives his strongest battles to his toughest warriors and you’re on of them
Madalitso: I can’t
She woke up
She never spoke to Lindiwe and Robert for a week which broke Lindiwe, one day she found Lindiwe crying and Robert comforting her then she closed the bedroom door
Madalitso: Mom
Lindiwe’s heart leaped with joy
Madalitso: I’m sorry for how I spoke to you the other day
Robert: come here
She approached them and group hugged
Madalitso: I’ve forgiven you
Lindiwe: will you come with us? (she nodded)
Madalitso: I have something to ask from you
Robert: anything
Madalitso: an you make Tapiwa your own
Robert: if its what you want
Tapiwa was located and adopted then flew back Australia where Madalitso met Peter and the other guys, she decided to stay back to study and not go to France then Agent67 and Tapiwa started dating
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Years passed and Madalitso graduated from her accounting programme and took over some companies she was offered by both parents and she was engaged by Peter.
They were all gathered in the lounge planning Tapiwa’s wedding and joy filled the room
Madalitso: you’ve been the best parents so far
Lindiwe: and you’re the best daughter
Robert: I love you two
They all hugged
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THE END
I love the ending because everyone got what they each deserves , especially Linda
Thumbs up writer, more ink to your pen
Huuuun happy ending. Nice one.
It's an honor to read this masterpiece.
Thank you
I love the ending especially how linda die her death is too good to be true
Linda roast to death
am sure hell will reject u
Nice ending thanks so much Author
Thanks author…i really like this novel
Wow!! Such am amazing ending for an amazing story…all thanks to the author
Thank you for the story , i love it.
Welldine author
Good job, more insights
A short lovely story……best story ever.
Well done author, more ink to your pen.
I love this story so much thanks writer it really taught a lot of lessons
Hunnnn I love this story. More ink pen author. U deserve the best dear.
Huuuun i love dis story
The story is interesting
Thumbs up 👍🏾
Hmmmmm what a babeque you are Linda
wow
Hmmmmmm….WORST DEATH LINDA