Tarasha 2 – Chapter 16 Part 3

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I’m returning this to the front-page on Oyin’s instruction. This episode and the ones following it were not proofread when they were originally posted but now has been. And as 26th of March approaches, it is imperative that we remind ourselves of what happened last in the story. ~~Modesty

 

TARASHA CHAPTER 16 PART 3

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© Oyinloye Oluwatosin Emmanuel

10:55am

‘NTV reporters are on their way,’ Tarasha heard Henry’s voice from the earpiece plugged in.

‘What position on the road are they now?’ She replied through the mouthpiece.

‘Coming from the left hand side,’ Henry replied. ‘In a car decorated with the NTV logo.’

‘Are you following them?’

‘Yes, I’m right behind them.’

‘Would you stop them or do I have to come?’ Tarasha asked.

‘Tara, I’m scared. You asked me to shoot two of their vehicle tyres and there’s no way I’m going to do it without causing an accident.’

‘F*** you Henry, I thought we talked this over,’ Tarasha replied angrily. ‘Fire at the damn tyres and stop them from getting here.’

Henry’s deep sigh could be heard from the other end. ‘Okay, I’ll do it, I hope I do it well.’

‘Do it well, else, we’d all be in trouble,’ Tarasha warned. ‘Make sure you leave the scene immediately and change the car where the extra one is parked.’

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10:28AM

‘Steph! What’s the matter with you?’ Madam Henrietta asked, afraid and alarmed at sound of the scream.

‘Mum!’ Stephanie screamed again, panting heavily and her eyes widening in anger. ‘Why did you burn the documents?’

‘I did it for your good, we don’t need them anymore, keeping them with us will only give room for bad memories to remain.’

‘Mum, I needed those documents and I still need them.’ Stephanie shouted.

‘You don’t need them Steph, what are you trying to do with them?’

‘Mum,’ Stephanie called almost breathlessly, now trying to control her anger.

Madam Henrietta stared at her, confused. She had never seen her angry at someone like that before let alone herself.

Stephanie kept a narrow gaze at the woman’s face as she tried to control her breath. Now, she was so sure that Madam Henrietta was working with Chief Elvis Richards and must have been the one seen at the airport the day before. The only mystery she was yet to understand was how the woman got to Abuja back before her the next morning.

‘Mum, you knew that those documents contain the proof of my father’s innocence and exposes the secrets of the Vice President but you chose to destroy them because they asked you to.’

‘What are you talking about Steph?’ Madam Henrietta asked, squinting at Stephanie’s face.

‘You know what I’m talking about Mum, don’t pretend.’

Madam Henrietta could see tears in Stephanie’s eyes as the girl spoke, she knew the girl was sure of what she was talking about. She was now also sure that she was seen with the Vice President in Lagos.

‘Steph, look at me. What are you doing with the documents? What you told me you needed were the pictures. It just happened that the pictures were in the files where the documents were…’

‘But you burnt up everything, both the pictures and the documents. Why didn’t you leave the pictures out of the fire?’

‘I told you before Steph, you do not need them. They will only cause troubles for you,’ Madam Henrietta shouted at her. She was already getting angry but was trying her best to put herself together. She closed her eyes and let out a breath, and then she continued to talk in a calm voice. ‘You don’t realize what trouble I’ve gotten you out of by burning those things.’

Stephanie could no longer speak again. Her eyes were full of tears and heart full of pain. She turned and proceeded back into the house, sobbing.

Madam Henrietta watched her go. She wondered why the girl was crying about the documents, she had never considered them as important because the lawyer that handed them over to her had told her that she could do away with them. She had checked the documents several times but had never been able to see how it incriminated the Vice President, so she wondered why Stephanie was claiming that the documents exposed the Vice President. It was unknown to her that Stephanie had gotten extra documents with the help of Dave.

Stephanie fell down flat into the bed with all her hopes of making the Vice President face justice finally gone. Madam Henrietta had burnt them with the papers. The only person who could now make the Vice President pay for his sins was Samantha Osman. But she also had troubles, Chief Nonso’s kidnap was being used to hold her back.

Stephanie’s phone which was placed on the footstool in the room began to ring. She didn’t bother to get it, she knew it was her lawyer whom she had promised to visit with the documents that morning.

The phone stopped ringing after thirty seconds and started again almost immediately. She managed to get to her feet and reach for the phone.

‘Good morning sir,’ she greeted.

‘Good morning Miss Stephanie,’ the lawyer replied in a cool voice. ‘It’s past ten already, I’m still waiting for you in my office.’

‘I’m sorry Barrister, I won’t be able to make it today anymore. Something happened here at home,’ Stephanie apologized.

‘Oh! I hope it’s not something bad. Your voice sounds shaky, hope you’re fine.’

‘Yes, I am. It’s just something little that’ll pass away soon.’ she answered, wishing she was saying the truth.

‘Okay, Please take care of yourself ma’am.’

‘Thank you.’

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11:25AM

The event had begun. Cole stood at his rightful position under the tent adjacent to the one under which the Vice President was seating. The officer who had previously occupied his position had been tied up and put in the boot of a car.

He stood alert like he saw the other security officers do and listened to everything being said by speakers of the event.

Thirty minutes later, his eyes located two people with media houses tags among the other journalists and photographers. The first person he identified there was Tarasha. A wig was covering her low cut hair and her face was faintly made up. The plans she had recited to him that morning began to play back in his mind. Her own job in the events centre was to get close to the Chief Security officer of the Vice President and attach something to his cloth while Cole’s job was to stand among the security officers and go back in one of the escorts cars which followed the Vice President to the place.

The second person he saw was Agent Dave James who was expected, also standing among the cameramen. Cole wondered for a bit why they all had to choose disguising as news media cameramen.

His fingers reached for the switch of the communication device and he connected to Tarasha.

‘Hello Boss, I just saw something.’ He said into the mouthpiece attached to the collar of his shirt.

It took sometime before Tarasha replied. She had to step back a little from the other journalists not to attract suspicions while talking.

‘What did you see?’

‘Agent Dave James is right there with you guys,’ Cole replied.

‘Huh?’ Tarasha replied. She had not noticed Dave James yet, she had been focused on covering every part of the event to make her appear hardworking like the other cameramen there.

‘Yes, I saw him now. He’s on a little disguise, an attached beard to his jaw and a moustache.’

‘Representing Desert Reporters right?’

‘Yes, Desert Reporters.’

‘Okay, I want you to put an eye on him and report every of his movement to me.’

Tarasha joined the other cameramen after the conversation. There were not too many of them, only seven media houses were invited and represented. Tarasha had made sure Henry give a report of his job before going into the events ground. Henry had shot at the tyres of the car and it resulted to a fatal accident which he didn’t wait to see.

She noticed Dave James immediately she joined the men again. He was just as Cole described his appearance. She began to monitor his every movement to see what he was up to.

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Rex watched the event in silence from the corner where he sat under the fourth tent. Dressed as a medical student of Rael University and holding one of the invitation letters, he had been at that corner fifteen minutes before the program started and had been watching since then but had not seen any sign of Tarasha. He was however sure that she was there or was going to join sooner.

12:55PM

The time finally came for the Vice President to speak and lead the doctors to the ceremonial opening of the hospital. The different cameramen lined up at the provided position, covering every part of the Vice President’s speech.

The man finished with his speech and led the team of doctors and dignitaries to the main entrance of the hospital where a decorated ribbon line was used to block the entrance.

Five of the cameramen positioned themselves well beside the dignitaries in order not to miss any part of the ceremony. The security officials were not left out also, Cole was one of them. They left their positions to guard the dignitaries and the Vice President.

‘Boss,’ Tarasha heard the Cole’s voice from her earpiece.

‘Speak on,’ she mumbled carefully.

‘Dave James has left you guys, I think he’s looking for something else.’

‘Okay, have you found what he is looking for?’ she asked. She had also noticed that Dave James had stopped moving with the other camera men but decided to focus on her own assignment of attaching the piece to the Chief Security officer’s body. She had positioned herself where she was sure the officer would pass when it was time to follow the Vice President down the hospital.

‘I don’t know precisely, he’s just looking around. I think he’s expecting us to be around.’

‘Put an eye on him.’

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13:20PM

Rex was up, standing with the other medical students and watching from behind where they were allowed to watch from. Like a monitoring camera, his eyes covered every single movement that happened close to the Vice President.

Loud cheers erupted from the people as the Vice President cut the ribbon into two halves with the use of the scissors. After a minute of some other formalities, they proceeded in for a tour of the place. It was then Rex noticed a female camera woman press her body against the Chief Security Officer of the Vice President and stepped back. He noticed that her lips began to move slowly after she stepped back. He stared more intently and noticed the earpiece in her ear. He immediately knew it was Samantha Osman and that she was talking to someone with a communication device. He took out his phone and unlocked it hurriedly.

‘Something has been planted on your CSO’s body,’ he typed as a text message and sent it to Chief Elvis. He didn’t expect getting results from the text message because he knew it was likely that the message would get only read after the event and if there was luck, an assistant of the Vice President would read the message and get to warn the CSO. However, he knew it was his best time to get Samantha Osman. He stepped away from the other medical students. He needed to change his clothes quickly.

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Police Agent, James sat there watching the event with very little interest. He was there only to see his father. Since the man had banned him temporarily from coming to his house, he had not been chanced to talk to the man or even ask about his health. He felt very bored with the whole activities but he was patient, he had decided that it was time to reconcile with his father and find a way to solve the challenges in a legal way.

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Elvis Richards legs felt heavier with every step he took but he still tried to look as cheerful as possible. His body and eyes were hot but he still felt some kind of cold in his body. Even as the doctors who led the exhibition explained and showed items to the listeners, Elvis Richards heard none of their words, the only thing he was concerned about was the end of the exhibition so that he could return home and have a good rest.

He began to feel very weak as they approached the pediatric center. His knees and fingers were trembling and his vision blurry.

‘Are you okay sir?’ he heard his assistant’s voice behind him.

‘Arrggh! I think I need a break, I…’ he wasn’t able to complete the statement as his knees buckled at that moment and he collapsed. He would have landed on the floor but for those around him and his assistant who was alert.

‘Are you okay sir?’ one of the doctors asked after they made him sit on a chair.

There was no answer from the man, he had his eyes closed as he managed to breathe.

‘Stay clear guys,’ the doctor said to the crowd gathering around, directing them with his hands to create space for fresh air to get to the man.

‘What’s wrong with him?’ another doctor asked as he joined the other in the squatting position.

‘He’s been down for some time with severe malaria,’ the Vice President’s assistant answered them.

‘I think we need to pause the exhibition for a while,’ one of the doctors said. ‘Let everyone excuse us for some time.’

The security officers ordered everyone including the cameramen and few medical students with them to leave the place.

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‘What’s wrong boss?’ Cole said into the mouthpiece on seeing Tarasha and the other camera guys approaching the entrance of the hospital from inside. He was standing at the entrance with some other security officers.

‘I don’t understand for now, the Vice President seems to be a little weak, the exhibition has been paused.’ Tarasha replied him as she walked out of the place. Even though he was behind her as she walked past him, she didn’t give him a look or act like she had seen him.

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2:00PM

‘Please I need to go in, I want to see my father,’ Agent James said to the security officials standing at the entrance of the hospital. It had been fifteen minutes after he had seen the other guests come out of the facility talking about how the Vice President collapsed.

The security officials spoke amongst themselves for a while before letting him in.

Agent James walked in hurriedly and soon located the ward which his father was carried into. He met two of his father’s security officers and the Chief outside the ward, only the P.A was inside with the doctors.

‘What’s happening with my father?’ He asked as he proceeded to the bed.

‘Agent James,’ his father’s P.A saluted, extending his hand for a handshake.

‘Hello sir!’ James replied and took the handshake warmly.

‘I thought they said he was getting better already.’

‘Yes, he was. He only started complaining again recently,’ the P.A replied.

James stood beside the bed quietly. He realized his father was conscious and had been listening to him talk. An Intravenous fluid bag was hung on a stand and the fluid was being rushed into his body.

‘Please excuse me sir,’ one of the doctors who just entered said to Dave to give him way.

James stepped back and stood beside the P.A. ‘I hope he’s not been going through a lot of stress recently.’

‘I don’t think so, it’s just been like normal work routine.’ The P.A replied.

‘Well, I think he needs a vacation. One needs to take a break from normal routine sometimes.’

‘Lets…’

‘Agent James Elvis,’ one of the doctors interrupted. Both of them turned to face the doctor.

‘Yes sir,’ James replied.

‘We need to run some tests on your father.’

‘That shouldn’t be a problem sir, as far as he gets better.’ James replied, feeling awkward a bit. He didn’t remember the last time he had a say over what concerned his father.

There was a long silence in the ward. James and the P.A kept their gaze on the Vice President’s face keenly. None of them ever thought the man would be the first patient in the hospital he had come to open officially.

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Thirty minutes had gone and Rex was still watching Samantha Osman from the same position. He knew that the man’s sudden illness was what must have caused her inactiveness. He also couldn’t take any action because he didn’t want to cause a scene on the event ground. He just sat patiently, waiting for the right time – a time where Samantha would leave the ground to a secluded place around or decide to leave the place totally.

He had also noticed Agent Dave around the place but hadn’t seen him doing anything significant. He however kept his focus on Samantha Osman.

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‘Tara, time is far spent, what is happening?’ Tarasha heard Henry’s voice through the earpiece. She got up from where she sat under the tent and walked to the back to reply.

‘Something happened here, the Vice President is down with a kind of illness.’

‘Oh! So what’s going to happen?’

‘I finished my task already, there may just be a little change in Cole’s part.’

‘So what do we do?’

‘We’d have to wait till the Vice President is ready to go,’ she replied.

‘Oh!’ Henry let out a sigh.

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ABUJA

The sadness in Stephanie’s heart returned as her eyes opened. She sat up sluggishly and picked her phone. She opened the contact lists and began to scroll through. She felt in her heart the need to call someone and explain her plight to, but she couldn’t find anyone to call. She let out a deep sigh. It was one of those moments again when she felt like she still had contact with Samantha Osman. The other person who would be right to listen to her was Dave, but she had discovered that Dave was not trustworthy and had made up her mind not to involve him in her affairs anymore.

She dropped her phone back in frustration and ran her fingers into her hair. She got up slowly and walked to the window, and then she remembered someone else she could talk to, her mum. Her mum! Her eyes widened at the thought of it. Her mum would have the right words to tell her at that moment.

The excitement disappeared again after she realized that her mum could only comfort her but would not have the solution to her problem. The only option left was still Dave. She picked up the phone again and scrolled to his number.

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EVENTS GROUND, LAGOS

Tarasha continued pacing around slowly after she had answered the call. She tried to see if the previous strategy could still work. She had attached an electrocuting piece to the belt of the Chief Security Officer of the Vice President. The piece would be activated when the Vice President would be going back to his house and electric shock would surge through the security officer’s body, causing a distraction in the vehicle. This would force them to stop the car for a while, meaning the Vice President would have to be delayed since he and his Chief Security Officer would be in the same car. Then if Cole had success in gaining entrance into one of the escorts’ cars, he would take care of the other three men in his car while Tarasha would attack from behind and take care of the men in the third car, leaving only the Vice President’s driver with him.

She was still thinking when she heard a strange voice sound behind her. She paused to listen carefully and heard the words correctly.

‘Samantha Osman,’ the male voice called again.

She felt a strange kind of fear and felt frozen to the ground that she couldn’t turn back. The man walked closer and stood beside her. He was dressed on black all through, he also had a black face cap and a dark shades on. She knew the man wasn’t Dave James and he was no ordinary man, the only person it could be was Rex.

She realized that she had run into error. She hadn’t made plans for his coming; she had been too distracted with the news of her mother that it took her time and ability to think, she knew there was some trouble for her and the team, Rex must have planned for her.

 

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136 thoughts on “Tarasha 2 – Chapter 16 Part 3

  1. Rex cant do anything serious in a open like this…. And there’s no darkness/ injury to support him against Tara… He’s just going to either dalay/ disturb their operation… Nice work Oyin

  2. I wish I can say that I’m still feeling the thrill of this story but I can’t. Delayed update is making it cold.

    All thesame, goodwork man

  3. I don’t even know what to comment anymore. Tara is becoming dumber everyday. Rex is almost working alone and still outsmarting Tara’s group. Shame. It doesn’t make sense anymore. Couple with the long wait for update.

  4. Oyin you need to listen to your readers. Tarasha won’t be your last story, the success of this story will determine so many things about ur next story.

  5. Nice work oyin, keep it up, i think this is return of revenge, tarasha nd her team should be getting upper hand in anything she does. Most importantly the delay is making the story very boring. Whenever i finished each episode i feel too bad that the next update will take too long.

  6. Tarasha is letting her emotions becloud her thinking faculty and it’s causing problems for the team.But how could all of them forget about Rex when they know he is in Lagos too,it just doesn’t add up..
    By the way, the long wait for updates is making this story boring..Please do something about our complaint.Thank you..
    Bravo Oyin..
    It’s still the best for me..

  7. Na wa o! Rex has upper hand , what is the revenge then? The updates takes too long to update making it not interesting,when someone complains some other people will say we will should appreciate him,in d first place you (Oyin) made us to fall in love with this story so we can tell u where it hurts us and we or I especially am telling you I am not happy with the way you are dragging this story too long , two years!!!! It is well o! Give us something to long for don’t let us read for reading sake or just to know how d story will end .

  8. Oga i swear u the make this story tire person…

    How can Tara forget abt Rex?? how possible is that?

    u are just giving Rex an upper hand in every situation

  9. I DON’T SEE ANYTHING AS REVENGE HERE ANYMORE, COS ALL TARA HAVE BEEN DOING IS FAILING WOEFUL AND SUFFERING SINCE REX ARRIVED….WITH ALL HER TEAM, ONLY REX IS JUST OUTSMARTING THEM ALL……EVERYTHING IS JUST GETTING UNINTERESTING COUPLED WITH DE DELAYED UPDATES

  10. Yea the story is getting boring bro try bring it back alive and do something about the slow update. The Lord Is Your Strength.

  11. Oyin, pls do not let e comments fr ur funs let u down
    They hv a point
    But bcos u are in Sch, balance things but not to e disadvantage of ur Education

    Find a way to satisfy them
    I suggest u write e update on Tuesday n post them e next day earlier
    The update time is very late

    Keep e story goin. Do not rush to end it
    Let it end when it should end

    Without customers, ur business is just a hobby
    Consider our Views
    Greetings from Ghana

    I stand for correction….

    Best story ever….

  12. Those of u critisizing the writer, may be u should take the pen from the writer and completes it urself, cus most of u are selfish, u don’t want to know his schedule all u think of is ur own satisfaction. Pls learn learn how to be contented and patient

  13. #FROM_A_CONCERNED_FAN- Well, I’ll be honest, I remember days when I couldn’t wait for the next Tarasha update but the truth is it isn’t the same now, the story has really lost its thrill. this is a story that is hinged on drama, romance, conspiracies and secrets mostly still hidden, assasins with history and most importantly action! & we’re starting to see less of it, Tarasha 2 was tagged “Return for Revenge” so making Team_T look dumb over and over again is not really playing into that theme, it’s killing the story. I understand that the story has a broad arc, please play into the important ones in a way that retains the thrill. The updates are not really doing it, try to increase it please, exhausting two story days within two weeks without enough SPICE only makes the story dull, uninteresting and its frustrating. I just read this episode today and that’s because i’m losing interest. i’m not discouraging you, if anything, i’m asking you to up your game, I love this story too much to not see it to the end.

  14. There’ll be no update tomorrow. I don’t want to force something out of my head now, I think it’s better to have complaints of no update than to make a boring update.

  15. Nice update bro! Bro i really fink u should consider ur reader we knw ur tight schedule but pleaseee! Find a solution, d delay is gettin me irritated bcoz i av no intrest in readin anyoda story xcpt tarasha am tellin u d truth nd av been followin dz story 4 a very long while now…..this not d way tarasha was then…so thrillin nd full of Action, and she as ben keepin Dr.ekwueme too long dat trouble also. Tnkz man more strength

  16. Most importantly let the story have something to do with it name return of revenge. Tara should always have the upper hand in any of her operations, one thing you should understand is that even if it is one update a week let it be very long and let there be one successful operation in each episode you will see that the story will really bounce back from it name Tarasha ” double humiliation” to’ ‘Tarasha return of revenge”

  17. tarasha is not it again, oh! how I wish it was still how it started on nairaland. honestly, the story no longer makes sense coupled with few updates and the continual defeat of the main .. pls make amendment, the talent’s in you bro.
    more_blessing

  18. him go dey give you excuse.. Bobo with the way you dey do.. me go stop checking your site the moment tarasha ends,, including the people I carry come here.. I know say e no mean sha but I don clear you my mind. so if you like stop the story idgaff

  19. I don’t lyk Tarasha role any more

    Oyin….you making Tara look like a duller to Rex
    let Rex know that Tara is not that soft

  20. You guys are really discouraging this guy o.
    Oyin please dont mind them, i believe they don’t know what it takes to write a story as wonderful as this. One thing i knw for sure is that you cant please everyone. Just do the ones you can and leave the rest to the almighty GOD.

    1. You must be a product of broken condom. Why calling him a fool? Anyway it takes a bigger fool to recognize another fool, but in this case u made a mistake.

  21. Haba @Donsatn or wetin b ur name self, it has nt gotten to dat naa, ahah wats even wrong with pple sef, behaving like wide aninals in d forest, has he said or done any tin to deserve dat insult from u? Pls let’s behave like matured adults we ar in dis forum biko and if u ar not satisfied with his services my dear u better bleep out, after all is not by force to b in dis forum nonsense.

  22. oyin one thing u must knw is never listen to wat pple say use ur own initiative .Always stay focus nd alert don’t use becuz of some stupid,scallywag ,contemptuous pigs ,a round peg in a square hole to leave ur fans,cuz d heart of men are evil both young nd old .Always knw that we luv u nd praise every of ur Work,hundreds of pple re reading ur post but it is not all that comment ,one thing u must knw is try hard to make d story interesting nd thrilling ,d romance & action..more power to ur elbow .kudos to u

  23. The author of this AWARD Winning story’s moral is down…
    Negative comments discouraged him…..

    i will give him a call from Ghana and cheer him up

    Oyin. Take heart pls…

  24. I think people are not being positive again.

    Okay think about dis.
    Do you know dat Rex doesn’t know about danjuma family since he began dis game.
    Dey kept it from him for their own reasons.
    Also, we don’t know the origin of rex, he could be a danjuma. Maybe he found out who Tara is and is here to join force,
    .
    U people should think positive cos my oyin the author is wise so just be patient and watch the game cos behind every cloud there is always a silver lining

  25. Sometimes I don’t know what to comment…not bcos I don’t know how to type but bcos it’s better to keep mute than to comment nonsense…. Reading some comments here is disheartening…Oyin plsss don’t mind them much…you got your life to live

  26. Lol
    You people are making me laugh here.
    I think oyin is experiencing what we call Writer’s Block. He’s probably stuck on the plot trying to give it a perfect ending. He’s trying to focus on his academics and other personal issues. The dude is distracted, Ok?
    Cut him some slack.

  27. To me the problem is not how the story goes,because its his story and we can’t expect it to go the way we want and besides,every episode doesn’t have to be a fight scene,if I were you oyin,I would continue my story the way I seem fit.
    the only problem is that you take too long to post an update… imagine,you were supposed to drop an update on 18th today is 24th yet nothing..

  28. Go to hell with ur stupid and useless story.

    May thunder scatter your family members if you continue. Goat.

    it’s not like you haven’t written the story down before, you are only copying and pasting it.

    May Ogun scatter that brain u use in lying. We are tired of u and ur useless ego. b******.

    1. Destiny killer. I know ur type. You only write this to discourage the young so that his dream will die. Now I declare that all your life dreams shall be supervised by your village people.

    2. That is why you’ll never be useful to yourself and family.
      You keep defaming others when you can’t still do it, not to talk of being better.
      Just know that the laws of nature can never change, you’ll reap exactly what you sow.

  29. Most boring story of all time.

    Poor fool looking for who will send him Recharge card or money.

    I know you intentionally stopped updating so we can curse you then you will decide to sell the remaining part.

    May you not wake up to continue the useless and stupid story. @oyinprince ur father there

    1. Donsatn or what are you called,. Give me your facebook profile link or your whatsapp phone number, and your life a and your generation life will never remain the same again

      Fool

    2. You are just an attention seeker,this forum is for smart people only,people who wish other members well not evil like you so just disembark,we don’t need your negative energy here,so bye bye

  30. Donsatn, listen to this cursed, u won’t escape it: “all the curses u boldly write against the author of the story, I COMMAND THE CURSE TO LOCATE YOU AND INHABIT YOU, HE THAT DIG A PIT SHALL FALL, HE THAT CANNOT CONTROL HIS TONGUE END UP IN DESOLATION AND DEATH.

  31. Oyin you have been a great writer and this story is such an interesting piece I have been reading this story for 2yrs now and I have never commented on it. But you don’t have to let what people say affect your good work. As far as am concerned this story is the best story I have ever read. One thing you have to understand is that you can’t please everyone. But keeping mute to comments is on call for.

  32. Great work must always attract recommendations, encouragement, critics, envy and jealousy.
    So, Oyin, don’t be discouraged by the negative comments rather handle them with maturity.
    I have been a silent reader of this story and have enjoyed every bit of it. I just want you to know that you are doing a great work and I admire your creativity. Kudos to you.

  33. Mr oyin if u r posting let us know ND stop making us refresh d page u gt mind ooo check d last time u post ND now look at d day different

  34. Am nt criticizing but I wonder why God will decide to create some animals in human flesh,some people are just so disgusting.
    Pls dis os not blasphemism agaist God.

  35. Donsatn is it your story,all the curse will be yours n yours alone In Jesus name Amen.Oyin don’t mind the fool o,God will enrich u with more wisdom from above n strengthen u.

  36. Just imagine the name, donsatan. So you still have the guts to still refresh and check if he has made an update. I’m sure by the special grace of God, that for the fact that you can still come back and check if he has update or not, you will meet your own soon.

  37. Guys, please ignore the comments from that guy throwing insults around. Since I read your comments about the story becoming boring, I’ve realized that the cause is the rush to always make updates on the specified days, then I decided to always take my time to make updates. I got home from a crusade not too long ago and I’m still writing, I don’t know how soon it’ll be ready but I crave your indulgence please, it should be ready today (Monday)

    1. Tnkz boss! Na wetin concern me u just yarn, u see all those argumen just shun it………me av been checkin since saturday morning! But plz monday shud b monday ooo! And dont delay it ooo post it in time

  38. @oyin
    I suggest you take a week break, so you can settle down and if there is chance you write reserve updates. we readers dislike disappointments…you know

  39. Excuses again and again. I’m really not impressed Oyin. positive & negative comments have been made by readers & they’re all right in their own way but you just fail or don’t care about what’s happening. Remember people have been complaining for long about the story we accepted your excuses, we gave you time, posting days where changed but yet your action became worse. You can issues but it doesn’t make sense to keep readers in suspense when you’ll post. even if it’s month break you need tell us so that we won’t be expectant rather than saying I’ll post sat/sun, late in d night and yet dissapoint us. I have many more things to say but let me not write an epistle

  40. Pride they say comes before a fall. In spite of his writing skills and gifts, Oyin lacks character. He doesn’t have a good manner of approach. His response ( whenever he deems fit) to readers’ complaints is always laced with subliminal insult, disregard or disrespect. Donsatan’s outburst (though condemnable) is borne out of frustration arising from his perception of Oyin’s disregard to his teeming readers.
    Some of us aren way older than him, but we never stopped calling him “Sir”, eulogising and appreciating his writing skills; just to encourage and egg him on. But never treats us well. He aberrantly takes us for granted at will.
    As for me, it is a promise, as soon as Tarasha 2 is done, I’m out of this Blog other Tarasha fora I belong to. Man’s altitude in life is largely determined by integrity and character

  41. Oyin, dis may be my last comment here. Don’t make people stop reading your stories after Tarasha. I criticized you to wake up, not to discourage you. If u have noticed when I started commenting last year, I’ve never fail to comment even when I didn’t enjoy the particular episode. I’ve personally invited more than 50 people here (I run a Facebook page of 14k fans). And I know most of them personally and none of them is happy. Even the guy who invited me to this story isn’t happy. My advise: your fans 1st. And find someone who can try to reply people’s comments. Kudos to u and don’t be disappointed if u don’t hear from me again.

  42. This is an interesting story but as far as I am concerned you have spoiled your reputation. U treat readers like trash.
    Put yourself in our shoes and tell me how you will feel if it were you

  43. Oyin you’ve lost it already and there’s nothing you can do from now to change present readers perception about you. You’re losing us in droves but quick advice before we disappear now or peradventure when tarasha ends. Always listen and heed to your readers complaints, be a man of your words, never fail on promises, readers can empathize with you when things are not going smoothly, always let them know beforehand when updates will be delayed. Your stories should be ready before posting day is due cos it seems you only begin writing on the day you’re supposed to post hence the pressure and inadequate proof reading.

  44. I £nedo mod£stly sugg£st in my own ide£a, how£ver vie£wing this situation in a sp£cial and most importantly various ways, without causing expr£ssion conflict around by consid£ring ev£ry one opinion, but since IS NOT MY DOINGS (Obumneme). I since£rely pr£sume that I have totally forgott£n what I want£d to say.

  45. You guys really need to calm down
    Even though I share the same perspective as y’all that have voiced your opinions
    I still think a few people have overdone it.
    Let’s not be ungrateful and be considerate about the writer at the same time.
    Let’s not be insultive please
    Even though I’m not happy with the look of things either…… Let’s just be patient.
    May God help us all

  46. Oyin i fink dz wia d problm lies…..Anticipation plus Shot updates sometimes, have been checkin since mornin often n often infact if am openin mah bible lyk dz, i wil b more closer to God, dz past 9pm monday nite stil no update for a story dat u ought to av updated yesterday…..and u gave ur word, my ques is Why??? Rmbr dat pple wil b loosin intrest in d story if it continues lyk diz……. I talk my own oooo

  47. This story has been on for like 3 yrs now, when a story is too long it looses its vibe.

    I like the story though but I have lost interest because the writer is unserious.

  48. Ve been reading alot of novel and I ve alot of ongoing story even though I ve like 15 blog that am visiting everyday but my friends name me tarasha because am addicted to the story ,so y do u want to spoil tarasha reputation by not updating in time and u are used to Africa time which not good, though we are not giving u any money oo but if we dnt visit ur site u can’t generate anything from us so please and please adjust. Tarasha is still the best story ever

  49. Waiting till 12am beta not renege on your promise @ Oyin. I hate to but I’ll ask u to spill the bean what’s going on? Are you in a kind of fix that holds u from updating? Let me stop here my next question will raise suspicions so I’m nt spiting it out.

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